Sunday, June 24, 2012

Prologue

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"Candi I just want to stay home." Onika Said sitting on her bed wrapped in her pink fluffy towel. She appreciated her friend wanting to take her out to get her mind off her exam score, but she didn't think it would help. She was going to be a nervous wreck until Monday morning when the results were handed back.

"No Onika I'm not letting you sit at home another weekend and think about that test. You have been beating yourself up for two weeks now and I can't watch the sad show again. So get up put on that dress and your hooker girl heels and show off that body that you never let anyone see." Candi walked out of Onikas room.

Onika looked off still racking her brain over her exam. She had worked so hard to get to this place and she wanted to take this test one time and get it over with. She knew Candi was right, she couldn't stay cooped up in her room she need to get out and enjoy her life. She got off the bed and walked into her closet to find an outfit. The outfit Candi had picked she would never wear. It was a tight form fitting red dress that was sure to show all her curves. She did not want all the unwanted attention. She picked out something she felt comfortable in yet lived up to Candis standards.

"Onika are you dressed yet?" Candi yelled out from the bottom of the staircase. She laughed. She did not understand how the wild child of there class became her best friend.

"Yeah." She looked down at her bra and panties. "Well almost." She heard Candi stomp away mumbling something, probably cursing her out for taking so long.

Onika and Candi had been inseparable since seventh grade year at Washington Middle school. Onika was always the pretty girl that all the boys wanted to be with. She was light skinned, nice body, with long "good hair" as people called it, and she always held high marks academically. She was quiet and timid which made the other girls think they could pick on her. One day Onika was at her locker in between classes when Sidney Hatcher and her minions surrounded her. They began pushing her around and knocking things out of her locker. Onika had had enough and fought back. She hauled off and socked Sidney in her right eye which sent her flying backwards onto the ground. Sidney friends began jumping Onika. Next thing she knew she saw another pair of fist flying through the air but they were being directed at the other two girls.

"I can't fight them both are you going to help me." Candi asked. Onika jumped up and grabbed Kayle and rammed her head into the locker while Candi handled Tina. When both girls stopped fighting back they let them go and they they fled quickly.

"Thanks a lot Candace." she said bending down to pick up her things.

"Call me Candi and don't worry about it, I have been looking for a reason to whoop they ass. I'm sick of them thinking they can run everyone." Candi bent down to help her put her things away. "Dang girl your locker is clean as a whistle. I'm lucky if I can locate a pencil in mine." Onika laughed.

"I can organize yours if you want me too." she offered.

"Really?" Candi asked.

"It's the least I can do for you helping with the three stooges." they laughed looking back at Sidney still sprawled out on the floor.

"You really K.O. her. I didn't think you had it in you."

"She had it coming."

"Yeah. I would love to take you up on that offer of organizing my locker but you don't owe me anything. I helped because it was wrong what they were doing."

"Thanks again."

"Hey what's going on down there?" They saw Mr. Wellington.

"Oh shit let's go." Candi pulled Nicki and took off down the stairs. That was the beginning of their friendship now they were 27.

"Onika!" Candi shouted which snapped her out of her day dream.

"I'm coming." she threw her clothes on and sat at her vanity and did her make-up. Nothing to fancy just some eyeliner, mascara, and some yellow eye shadow. She slipped on her heels then made her way downstairs. She found Candi in her fridge raiding it as usual. "Are you done feeding your face? Can we go?" Candi swallowed the bite she took from her ham sandwich.

"I know you are not rushing me. Why didn't you tell me that Mrs. B sent you food? And what happen to the outfit I picked out?" Candi walked out of the kitchen.

"Nobodies rushing you. And because you always eat all of my food. And I'm not wearing that hoochiefied dress out in public." Onika locked the door behind her.

"Stingy heffa." Candi said unlocking her car. Onika chuckled. "And that dress was perfectly fine."

"Mhhmm." Onika said ignoring her and getting in the car.


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When they reached club Pulse it was in full effect. The line was wrapped around the corner and you could hear the music bumping through the walls of the big brick building. All the women were dressed to impress, the men looking as fine as glass of red wine. Candi drove her car up to the front of the club.

"Girl ain't no sign for valet here. What are you doing?"

"Onika let me do me." She said. A man opened Candis door and helped her out. Nicki's door opened and a man presented his hand for her to take and helped her out the car.

"Thank you." she said looking up at the handsome man. He had to be at least 6ft. but he was a light bright so she kept it moving. She liked her guys chocolate when she actually had one. She rounded the car and followed Candi up to the bouncer.

"Make sure I get my keys in a timely manner Rosco." Candi told the bouncer. He shook his head while lifting the rope to let them in the club. Candi grabbed Onikas hand so she wouldn't lose her, as they made their way to the V.I.P. section of the club. Onika looked around at all the dancing going on around her. She didn't ever come to this side of town so the fashion was different. She loved it but wouldn't dare to wear it out in public. Candi had bought her a couple of outfits, they were hanging in her closet and that's exactly where they would stay.

"Hey Candi." the bouncer said then looked behind her at Onika. "Oh shit you got Miss. Goody Goody to come out to this side of town?" Nicki looked up to see who it was. Randy Elise, he always liked her but she never showed him the time of day so he made her high school years hell. She rolled her eyes and looked away.

"Leave her alone Randy, are you letting us in or not?" he looked at Onika.

"Yeah just keep her in check."

"Boy I don't even talk to you. Keep yourself in check." Onika said.

"Nicki." Candi said stopping the conversation before it got out of hand. He let them go pass giving Onika an evil glare.

"I can't stand that boy." They took off their Jackets and handed them to the coat check guy. One thing about club Pulse is they always had good eye candy. The V.I.P. section was filled with a bunch of old classmates that she did not want to see. She leaned on the railing and looked below at the sea of people. Whack! She felt a hand hit her behind. She turned around to see Candi laughing. "What did you do that for?"

"An ass like that needs to be tapped every once and awhile. And lord knows you ain't had none in long minute!" Candi said laughing. "Let's go get a drink."

"We have to go all the way back downstairs?" Nicki said rubbing her butt. Candi shook her head and lead Onika to the other side of the wall where there was a bar and a smaller dance floor. There was a big crowd around the bar spectating some thing. Candi fought their way through to the front. It pays to be short at times. Onika searched for what they were amazed by. There he stood 6ft3, hundred-seventy-five pounds of pure muscle, and as chocolate as he wanna be. Smooth skin with pearly white teeth. He had the audience captivated by all the tricks he was doing with the bottles while mixing peoples drink orders. Candi looked over at Onika.

"Nicki pick up your jaw your starting to drool." Onika snapped out of her trance.

"I was not drooling."

"Look at the puddle on the counter." She pointed.

"Where?" Onika's eyes searched the counter while Candi laughed. She looked up at her with a glare. "You play to much."

"So you like him?"

"Who?"

"Safaree."

"Who's that?" Candi nodded towards the bartender. "So that's his name." she thought to herself. She stared at his full lips and thought of all the ways he could use them on her. He could start at her neck then down to her breast he could use them on her stomach then on her thighs making his way to her--" Candi nudged her out of her thoughts. "No I don't like him." She straightened her top.

"Mmhhm" Candi knew she was lying. "Safaree." She shouted.

"What are you doing?" Nicki said wide eyed grabbing Candi's arm.

"Ordering our drinks." She shrugged her off her arm. Safaree walked over to them with his 1000 watt smile plastered on his face.

"Hey Candi, I haven't seen you here in awhile." he said with his deep voice. Nicki felt weird movements in her lower abdomen. He looked at her with his big eyes the color of cinnamon. "Who's your friend?" he asked Candi.

"This is Onika but you can call her Nicki."

"It's nice to meet you Nicki." He extended his hand. She stared at it like it was not of this earth. "It's hand you know most people shake it." He said.

"Oh I'm sorry. It's nice to meet you to Safaree." She took his hand in hers. They were so soft but in a manly way she thought. He kissed her hand and their eyes met when he pulled away.

"Okay enough with all this cutesy shit. I need to of your strongest frozen Bahama mamas you have ever made. And let go of her hand." She smacked his hand away.

"Your hater Candi." he walked off to get the drinks. Candi looked over at Nicki.

"You don't like him eh?"

"Shut up Candance."

"Oh you haven't called me that in awhile, must have hit a nerve." Safaree came back with their drinks.

"These are on the house ladies, enjoy your night."

"Thanks." they said in unison and left the bar.

Twenty minutes later Candi was bumping and grinding on some dude to a Reggae. Nicki was still nursing her first drink, while Candi was on her third. Nicki was sitting on the couch in between two guys that kept hounding her to dance when she received a text message from her friend Willie that worked in the law department. She got so excited when she read the text that she dumped her cold drink in the guys lap next to her.

"I'm sorry." Was all she said before she got up and ran over to Candi. "Candi! Candi! Candi!" She pulled her away from her guy.

"What girl?"

"Read this." Candi took the phone and read.

Willie: Just seen your Bar exam score. Congratulations Ms. Maraj you are now a official Lawyer. :)


"Ahhhhh" They screamed together and hugged each other.

"Look at you Ms. Lawyer." Candi said. "I told you you didn't need to be worrying about that test.

"Candi let's celebrate. Shots, let's go." She pulled her towards the bar. "Safaree." she yelled. He looked her way licking his lips. "Six shots. Line them up let's go."

"What's your poison?"

"Tequila."

Two hours later both girls were white girl waisted. Nicki was dancing with everyone, it didn't matter if you were male or female she was feeling you up on the dance floor. She was currently dancing with Candi grinding her butt against her but staring at Safaree. She turned to Candi and whispered in her ear.

"I want him so badly Candi."

"Who?"

"Safaree. Have you seen his lips. I'm going to go kiss him." she stood looking across the room at him. He was on his break and on the other side of the bar at this time.

"Girl I-can't-get-involved-with-a-man-NIKA ain't about to go kiss no man she just met." Candi laughed. Nicki looked at her.

"Oh yeah? Watch this." She made her way through the crowd keeping her eyes glued to Safaree. He stood up getting ready to move when he turned around and found Nicki standing in front of him.

"Hello Ms. Nicki--" She jumped on him wrapping her legs around his waist he placed his hands on her butt making sure she didn't fall. "What the hel--" She claimed his lips as hers for the time being. Candis jaw dropped.

"Oh Lord it's time to go. She has truly lost all her marbles and screws to up top." She went and pryed Nicki off of Safaree. "Sorry about that Safaree."

"I'm not." Nicki said looking at him seductively while smiling. He rubbed his lips.

"I'm not either. But Candie She cam on to me I would never with her in this state."

"I know Safaree, i seen the whole thing."

"Do you guys need a ride home?"

"Yes." Nicki said reaching out for him and giggling. He smiled at how a little brown liquid could give someone so much courage. She would barley look at him earlier now she couldn't keep her hands off him.

"No we will take a cab home. See you next time Safaree." Candi said.

"Yeah next time."

"Your such a party pooper Candace."

"Yeah, you'll thank me for it later." They made their way down the elevator and out the club.

*Soooo What did you think? And don't worry you know this will not be my color scheme nor will this be BG. I would never make you look at this wack ass ish! lmao PLEASE BE HONEST!*

27 comments:

  1. I LOOOOVVEED IT!! LOOOOOL at her being shy but freaky in one. Then she gets to drinking.... kissing men she just met... tisk tisk. She needs a whoopin. YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY at her becoming a lawyer though. ^____^ So when are they[Onika and Safaree] gonna hook up? I's reeeaaaddddyyyyy!!!

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  2. I like it I like that they aren't famous that makes it interesting to see where u are going.But you already know I am a fan of ur writing.What song was she dancing to lol

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  3. Okay ...honestly ... *sighs* ... I LOVE THIS!!

    Seriously so far I'm loving it because it has my attention and wanting the next chapter to hurry n b posted!! *side eyes*

    I love that Nicki is a lawyer and I also love that I am in the story ^__^

    Safaree is a bartender!! Shout out to a fellow bartender

    I hope this doesn't mean ur not doing BTY anymore tho

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  4. I like how this is going. The young Nicki or Onika, who is NOT a rapper. I'm excited to see what the story line will be which I know includes her becoming a lawyer! So I wonder how long it's going to take before Nic and Safaree become a couple. This is going to be interesting I think to see Nicki as not being in the spotlight of fame, so to speak.

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  5. To be completely honest, I love it!!!!!!!!

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  6. I LOVE IT! It's new, it's different. I love the set up, the details, everything. It's not the typical "Nicki Minaj fan fiction" she's a typical person. Yeah I'm ready for another installment of this.

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  7. I agree with iThrive4NICKI. I think that's what I like most about this story. It's not related with Nicki the RAPPER. It's her as a normal person and a Lawyer which I LOVE :D I like this story, you should definitely continue. LOL at Safaree being a bartender. But yes, GREAT story and way to start it off. (@NickiMPinkslam on twitter)

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  8. I AM LOVING THIS ALFUCKINGREADY!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S ALSO GREAT BECAUSE SHE ISN'T NICKI MINAJ IN THIS FIC!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I CAN'T WAIT TIL IT FULLY STARTS

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  9. I LOVE this.... I like how it's different it doesn't focus on her being a rapper and I like how it just shows them being normal.... Now when are they gonna get together. I can't believe her just attacking that boys lips -_-

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  10. interesting. Nic the lawyer... squinting in a courtroom... making ppl squirm when she give them blank stares. lol

    liquor made her bold. lol i honestly think this is how Nic reacts to liquor in her system too!

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  11. Lmfaoooooo I LOVED this!! It's funny yet cute but obviously there will be some seriousness with her being a lawyer and all now! Keep this going!!

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  12. Aww Nic is a lawyer.
    Lol, but this is really cute! (:

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  13. Yassssssssssssssss! :D
    Yooooo! I love this story! Like start it soon. Cant wait!

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  14. This Is Very Cutee!! LMFAOOO @ She Has Lost Her Screws , Candi Funny As Shit. I Like This Story!! The Whole Story Was Funny AS Fuck. I Like It, Continue.

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  15. Being honest...I Love THIS!!! I like the storyline.. I like that she isnt famous so it focus in her personal life.I like that her and Safaree doesn't know each other yet cuz we get to witness their relationship from the beginning. Yayyy for her being a lawyer ^_^. I love how you started this. Please continue.

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  16. I Love This It's Interesting and I'm Curious On What's Gonna Happen Next.!

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  17. Really wanna read more! Keep this going!

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  18. OMG I love it. I needed something different , it's like every other Onikafaree story was saying the same damn thing. Glad u changed it up. I love it. Post soon, I'm dying to know what will happen the next day.

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  19. Omg I love this! You should definitely continue. It's different.. I like. Awww she's a lwyer ^_^ haha Candi is crazy!

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  20. Wowwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!! I am definitely feeling this concept. Definitely. My Nic as a lawyer. She POPPIN. This dope. I like how you took it in a new direction, compared to what you used to.
    Awe, Nic worried about the test. :-( she moping around...I don't like. Yassss at candi making her go out. Dead at how they met lol. Nic was fighting back, fuck the bullshit. Real talk. Awe at Nic being shy. The club life ain't her. So timid. Oh??? I'll beat ole dude Ass. Randy...is it? Yeah, him. Nic checked his ass. BEWP. Yasssss at her checking for Safaree and him checking for her too. :-) OMG!!! YASSSS. Nic passed her test! Ajsksakalalalshajajabajajsksk lawyer status. I'm proud. Oop! Lol now she's wasted lmaooooo. YASSSSSSS. She clowning. Being free. Oop! She jumped on dat oss. He want it!!! She want the zick. YASSSSS. I'm glad candi stopped before she got too wild but I wish she came out her shell all the time :-)
    Serious this is POPPIN. It's cool looking at Nic as a regular human. No fame. A lawyer. And the shy girl she really is. I dig this concept. Continue.
    -@MinajFanDetroit

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  21. Oh shit! Why haven't I comment on this yet?! Anyway, you know what I think of this. I'm already in love with this story so far. And PLEASE, post SOON! I need another chapter..

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  22. You gotta finish this one (: @Shaluvsotmsls

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  23. I LOVE THISSSSSS!!!!!!!!! omg, plzzzz keep doing this. i like how you gave Nicki a non-hoodrat personality and how you didn't make Safaree a drug dealer, this seems like its gonna be a great story.

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  24. Hmmmm. Honestly I really like it. I love that it's different and Nickis the one who's a shrew, doesn't like to party doesn't wear form fitting clothes, and has to be tamed or be taught to let go. It's interesting I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter. I'm locked in. I want another chapter lmfaooo

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  25. It's really good; I love the new approach *sigh* please continue we've hardly had any OF this year and your writing is>>>>

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  26. THIS WAS SOOOO GOOD!!!! POST SOME MOREEEEEEE *cries* xo

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